Here's what I've been able to find so far. Note that some of these articles don't explicitly mention Bethke or his video, but they still address the issues that Bethke has raised. If you find a link I should add, please leave a comment and let me know.
- Fr. Dwight Longenecker: Spiritual but not Religious?
- Jimmy Akin: Why I Hate People Hating on Religion
- Marc Barnes: Why I Hate Religion But Love Jesus: The Smackdown
- Matthew Warner: I Hate Religious People?
- Taylor Marshall: St. James vs. YouTube's "Why I Hate Religion"
- Mary Lane: Why I Love Jesus AND Religion
- Marcel LeJeune: Does Jesus Hate Religion? Should You?
- Yoseph M. David: The Hand of Satan in the "I Hate Religion but Love Jesus" Movement
- "Catholic Chris": Why I Love the Church - A Response to "Why I Hate Religion but Love Jesus"
- Tom Hoopes: He Hates Religion But Loves Jesus. Good Luck With That ...
- Fr. Shane Johnson: Jesus > Religion?
- Owen Swain: Confession: I Am Not a "Follower of Jesus"
- Russ Rentler: "Why I Hate Religion": A 3rd Century Heresy Rears Its Ugly Head...Again
- Godwin Delali Adadzie: Why I Can't Hate Religion for Jesus
- Anthony S. Layne: Internet Dumbth Goes Viral Again
- Joe Heschmeyer: Jesus v. Religion?
- Julie Robison: Not Even Wrong
- Brent Stubbs: Religion vs. Relationship
- Ryan Kraeger: Why I Love People Who Hate Religion
- Sr. Margaret J. Obrovac, FSP: Spiritual, but Not Religious
- Theresa Noble: Why I Hate Religion but Love Jesus: A Beer with Jeff Bethke
Of course, you can also read my post: A Catholic Response to "Why I Hate Religion but Love Jesus" by Jefferson Bethke
- "make a friar": "Why I Love Jesus but Hate Religion: A Catholic Response"
- Fr. John Hollowell: "Untitled"
- "Catholic Chris": Why I Love the Church - A Response to "Why I Hate Religion but Love Jesus" ["Catholic Chris" is in both lists because he wrote an article and made a video!]
- "emceemiko": I Love Jesus Religiously (Catholic Spoken Word)
- "defense4thefaith": A Response to "Why I Hate Religion but Love Jesus"
- Fr. Robert Barron: Fr. Barron Comments on "Why I Hate Religion, But Love Jesus"
- "Fr. Pontifex": Why I Love Religion, and I Love Jesus || Spoken Word
- "DB Disciple": Why I Love Religion, and Love Jesus || Spoken Word (Response Video)
- Patrick Coffin: How to Love Jesus AND Religion
- "gjp125": Why I Hate Religion, and Love Jesus || Catholic